Now I've Seen Everything...
Jan. 11th, 2013 04:09 pm So, I've seen tons of amateur stories now where the POV character insists that she's misunderstood and outcast by others despite their not doing anything (so far as I could see) to merit her dislike of them. But I was recently given a story to edit that's just the opposite: the POV character is criminally neglected by everyone whom we see who's supposed to be responsible for her safety, and she makes light of this and brushes off a severe injury she sustains that nobody bothers to take her to the hospital over as an exciting adventure!